tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2744788847652263328.post1603283274291117180..comments2022-02-21T02:13:34.581-08:00Comments on Eat...Sleep...Write: just blah {your opinion needed}A Reformed Hippiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17393269475784866832noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2744788847652263328.post-84106677502630598182011-09-21T08:28:32.273-07:002011-09-21T08:28:32.273-07:00Thank you all! I'm afraid this is a lone parag...Thank you all! I'm afraid this is a lone paragraph begging for a friend. But my mind is currently on a different writing project. Thank you all again.<br /><br />LèrowenA Reformed Hippiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17393269475784866832noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2744788847652263328.post-80740642902700848482011-09-20T16:32:19.006-07:002011-09-20T16:32:19.006-07:00This is a great paragraph...it shows a lot of diff...This is a great paragraph...it shows a lot of different emotions.<br /><br />There are certain spelling mistakes, but overall, good job.<br /><br />Random paragraphs are great.Tabithahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11233427055802677800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2744788847652263328.post-39889677295648343972011-09-20T16:29:43.326-07:002011-09-20T16:29:43.326-07:00In a word: intriguing.
This is an awesome bit of w...In a word: <b>intriguing.</b><br />This is an awesome bit of writing! Not only is it cleverly and beautifully worded, but it immediately draws the reader in and leaves them wanting to know the story. If these were the opening lines of a book, I would sit down and read the next few hundred pages in one sitting!<br /><br />Thanks for sharing this, Lerowen. You are a fantastic writer with a truly unique style and it's always a delight to read what you write. =)<br /><br />Blessings,<br />~ LizLiz Pattersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00512153624250693163noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2744788847652263328.post-49921796522945450282011-09-20T15:36:51.318-07:002011-09-20T15:36:51.318-07:00I really like it!! I want to find out what happens...I really like it!! I want to find out what happens!Emily Ann Putzkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03663345569249469554noreply@blogger.com